Friday, May 27, 2005

slapping gums

we play games, my friend and i. we tread a line. we have heartrending talks, carefully managing not to rend anything. our hands are held out, our palms sealed. lines crossed out.

occasionally we wince at the nip of a teething truth on our ankle. it rarely draws blood and, later, it rarely persists. bone breaking through flesh needs contant sucking pressure. and a sharp loving clamp every now and then. but we leave it in ignominious peace and talk only of chewed food. habitual rumination. another enamel soldier surrenders his ridges and draws back.

i'm beginning to think this is a generation disconnected at the hip. we fuck with choreographed abandon and cower at the intrusion of a hug.

8 Comments:

Blogger warya said...

oh god abu choreographed abandon.
sigh.

11:54 PM  
Blogger tris said...

the 'intrusion of a hug'. I am like that.

6:09 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

you are right, Sheetal, she writes lovely.
Shweta

3:46 PM  
Blogger Sheetal said...

Told ya.

4:23 PM  
Blogger Deepa said...

bu: i was a little spooked at how morbid that sentence turned out, abu. like you know, unsuspected cynicism in your own voice?

tilotamma: really? i'm like that about handshakes. i will hug anyone, but shaking hands weirds me out

and shweta, sheetal: :D thank you most warmly, sistersvyas. also, for indulging the slowest blogger on the planet

4:50 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

you're right about the disconnected from the hip thing. your generation, and mine(i do believe we belong to different ones even if just a few years apart...)seem to make outlaws of people who aren't for "freedom" so ppl like me become the conservative aunties. so the next time you hear some one say "it's the fifth date and the bitch hasn't let me do her yet!!!" ...
well...
btw, i really like what you write. the words seem to flow out effortlessly.

8:34 PM  
Blogger Deepa said...

thank you querty :) it isn't effortless of course, if it were i'd have given up by now.

ps - that comment about the generations...do i sound really awfully young? because i'm not, you know

12:00 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

it's actually inspiring to know that your writing does not come as easily as i thot!!
..and i guess the comment about the generations...we're both basing this on several assumptions arent we?? me being younger/older than u...you being older/younger than me...! for all we know, we could be the same age, sharing the same birthday and maybe even the same birthtime and place!!!
now THAT would be freaky.

5:59 PM  

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